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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Oh my goodness. THIS CHAPTER. I read it when you first posted it, and I was amazed at the emotional punch it packs! So I decided to pick this one for that review I owe you :)

First, can I just gush about Dominique for a second. I absolutely love what you're doing with her character. I love that she is equal parts sweetness and fire. I love that she's been able to find a home in 1234 when she knew that something just wasn't right about her modern-day life. And (this is going to sound weird) I really like seeing a female character who's comfortable in a traditional gender role. There's so much pressure to create Strong Women in stories, and after a while they all start looking the same. You've created a woman who is at ease in a world dominated by men. But at the same time, she's not afraid to do the right thing no matter what society might say (like grabbing a sword and fighting to save her man.) She can do it all, and I love seeing such a well-rounded portrayal of her :)

At first I thought I wouldn't like Callum. But he really grew on me over the last few chapters, and I can see how he and Dominique would have really complimented each other. He's easygoing and funny, and I was glad to see Dominique trying to make things work with him. Like her, I could definitely see the two of them being happy together. Also, I'm glad you didn't make the "rival" a bad guy in this. It makes the situation even more emotional and complex.

And then this chapter! I knew something had to happen to Callum (because of course Ignotius and Dominique have to end up together), but I can't believe you did THIS to us! What can I say, Drue? It was so touching and deeply sad. You did such a wonderful job of pulling us into this moment. When he was dying in Dominique's arms, I was spellbound.

You're doing such a wonderful job! I'm following your updates and really enjoying them. Keep up the awesome work!

--Maggie

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