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Review:megthechef43 says:
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Ok... Wow... I know I'm many months overdue on this request but I'm kinda glad I waited because this was intense! In a very good way, I was literally terrified for Dom at the end. I had that creppy feeling that something bad would happen to her.

This was definantly not boring, I was on the edge of my sitting, reading as fast as I could to see what happened to Dom. The description was amazing in this story, it wasn't overpowering and really added to the dark tone of this chapter and the suspense that was growing from the first word.

Characterization was great with Dom. I'm glad you made her a red head, most go for blonde but I find it hard to see a weasley without red head. Other than that I liked that she was happy with her life and scrolled throught the things going for her.

Great chapter!!!

Until next time...

Meg

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing, no worries about the wait haha. I am glad you were terrified for Dom as that was my aim.

Its good to know you didn't find this boring, and that you enjoyed the description. I am pleased that you found the dark tone and suspense well.

I am happy that you liked the characterisation, I do think she'd inherit the Weasley trait too! I am glad you liked it over all, thanks.


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