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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

Initially, I was going to read the next chapter of your short story collection but then I saw this and I just couldn't resist an Alice one-shot as I adore her character and seeing a story centred around her had me curious.

I loved your plot, the way you revealed the events to us through Alice's eyes. Her characterisation was perfect, just like how I'd imagine her to be. I enjoyed the whole "M'alice" concept as well, it was very believable. I think you got across all the emotions that Alice experienced throughout, while memories and in the present, very well and it was a great insight into her mind. The allusions enhanced the effectiveness of it all too. I didn't see any glaring errors and loved this one-shot. You did a brilliant job with the descriptions, flow, concept, and characterisation.

Loved it! Great work!

Author's Response: Hello! :) I'm glad you decided to check this story out!

I'm very honoured that you liked the plot and thought Alice was well portrayed as you imagined her! For some reason, although she's a pretty obscure character I had this clear vision of what she must be like. I'm very happy you noticed and enjoyed the allusions, and M'Alice. It was just too much fun of a word to play around with! :)

Thank you so much for this very lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)

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