Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:-BokDinosaur- says:
Hey, I'm here for the Ravenclaw review tag. (Go Team Blue!)

I really enjoyed reading this story, I think you've got the characterisation of Lorcan, Lysander and Cass (I'm too lazy to type her full name :P) done really well. I love Cass' portrayal as the bully and Lorcan's painting as a scared guy. And I loved Lysie, his dottiness and psychology-obsession was so funny to read about. I'd say he's my favourite character so far. :)

All your descriptions are really good, there isn't too much, but there's enough to give me a clear picture of what's going on, so kudos to you there.

The pacing of the story was really good, I found that it was light and easy to read, and reached the bottom of the page in no time at all.

I love how you intergrated all the psychology into the plot, it seems very believable and realistic.

All in all, a really good start to your story.

Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks for reviewing my story! :D

It's totally cool that you abbreviate Cassiopeia's name. It's a bit long to type, I know! :) The characters are all quite dotty, I think, but I really loved making them all their own separate entities. I'm very glad that you laughed at "Lysie," and that you've given him a pet name!

Thanks, thanks, thanks for all of your wonderful compliments!!! :)

~UnluckyStar57


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 978
Submit Report: