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Review:patronus_charm says:
This story keeps on getting more and more mysterious. I really liked the idea of Scorpius working for Lucy as I always liked and she seemed to have this genuineness about her. I think the idea of her supplying the apothecary suits her perfectly. I feel as if her and Scorpius may be coming closer and I think itís nice. Thereís almost too much history between him and Flora for them to be as close again due to the kiss and everything which happened from it so itís nice for him to have a friend again.

One thing though, whereís Fauna? Weíve barely had any mention of her and it makes me wonder whether that kiss really did divide them so much and that theyíre not as close. Then again, this is only chapter three so sheíll probably pop up again sometime soon. I love the idea of him and Flora being flatmates though; itís just really nice to see that theyíre such great friends.

Ah the mystery about Albus is killing me. Maybe he is a criminal like Flora thought he might be in the last chapter due to him disappearing all of the time. Or maybe he has a completely different secret about him. I canít believe that thereís two things that have to be revealed to me, itís all too much. Iím really enjoying the darker tone this story has taken as itís really interesting and the disjointed style works really well as it matches Scorpiusí mind-set at this moment in time.

Iím eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and I just realised I wasnít even meant to be reading this until my exams are done. Oh well, itís far too addictive to just leave it there being unread!

-Kiana

Author's Response: I can never help but bring a Lucy into the story when a Scorpius is involved - actually can't resist - but, well, they don't call it an OTP for nothing.

Thank you for bringing her up! I'll admit that I literally just forgot about her character - I feel awful about it, and I've written a big all-caps note in my notebook to REMEMBER FAUNA and I am adamant she'll appear in chapter six or seven. I'll also raise, in a future chapter, Flora and Scorpius' friendship. And where Flora and Albus stand...

Plot twist: Albus is actually a bootlegger. I heard he killed a man once...

I'm glad to hear you like the style! I was very uncertain about it, so, well, good to hear I pulled it off for at least one reader~

Thank you! ♥


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