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Review:patronus_charm says:
This chapter was pure awesome. I love angst, I love The Smiths, and so this story is amazing in terms of my loves! The banter between Draco and Scorpius is lovely and Iíve never seen them have such an easy and friendly relationship before but itís really lovely to read. If you hadnít noticed from all the others reviews I bombarded you with I may be a little bit in love with Scorpius.

Itís really exciting getting this from Scorpiusí POV because I always wanted to know what he was thinking throughout Welcome to Blunderland and now I get to. Itíll be exciting to see whether heís fully over Flora or not and how he feels about Fauna. Though you said this was darker than the prequel Iím hoping that there is still some romance on the cards. Though Iím fine if there isnít as Floral will probably still be around for me to enjoy.

Iím quite keen on Floraís idea of him pretending to be a zombie it sounds rather fun actually and I would definitely use that to my advantage if I was Scorpius. Even if he can potentially kill people Iím glad that the Slytherins are leaving him alone as it was bad enough having to read about it through Floraís POV but having to actually witness it through his own would be horrible.

Ah this was an amazing first chapter and I canít wait to read on :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Angst! The Smiths! The two things I'm made of! So I'm glad it appeals to you too...

Ah, I'm glad you like Draco and Scorpius! I've always envisioned the two of them as having a difficult relationship but, well, your dad's your dad, you can forgive things quite easily. Besides, where else would Scorpius have got his posy intellectual bigheadedness from? There's more Draco and Scorpius interaction in chapter five - in fact, the /entire chapter/ is just the two of them - so I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts on that.

I'll be sure to include those thoughts in later chapters! (In fact, I'm working on the scene in question right now). It is darker, but I hope it'll be more black humour than soul-crushing angst. An appropriate subtitle for this fic would be 'how many death puns can Julia make in 17,000 words or less'. The answer is /a lot/.

Thank you so much for returning to review, and I'm glad you like it so far! ♥


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