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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the Blue vs. Bronze Review Battle at the forums.

I have to say, this is a really good chapter. I love all of your descriptions and I can just imagine the atmosphere of the Pink Hippogriff. It's a very charming place!

Daphne's characterization is really good. She seems like a marvelous character, and she doesn't sound very cliched. I can't wait to meet Theo, to see if he's worth her attentions!

And then, Astoria comes into the picture, ruining Daphne's picturesque scene. She's left Draco, I'm guessing? It will be very interesting to see how her relationship with Daphne develops over the course of the story.

I'm definitely going to read more of this story because it was just so charming. Great work! :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for reviewing!

Ahh I'm glad you like the Pink Hippogriff! Ooh, 'charming' is such a lovely description! :P
I'm very glad that Daphne doesn't come off as cliche; I've tried to make her as three dimensional as possible... Haha, well if you get round to reading the next few chapters, you can examine Theo and see what you think of him!

It's not actually Draco that Astoria's left, but he will crop up later! Daphne and Astoria's relationship has actually turned into one of the main plot points of the story, so I'm glad that you're already interested in that!

Thanks again for such a great review! I hope you keep reading! :)

-Bethany


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