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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was certainly a very interesting one-shot. I love angst-y stuff centred around Slytherin characters, and I think you did Pansy complete justice. Your whole expression of her thoughts, her characterisation, the 'power' concept was all nicely done and I enjoyed it. Your descriptions were strong and captivating, yet not overdone which was good. I liked how you wrote certain scenes without giving too much detail and yet it being just enough. The ending scene caught me off-gaurd but it was well-written. The brief glimpse we got into Draco was believable. All in all, superb job!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey you! Sorry for taking ages to reply :P

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that you could tune in to the odd ending. I always felt that Malfoy's selfishness and entitlement needed to be dealt with more in fanfiction. He is an interesting character and enjoys a strong ark in the books, but that doesn't erase his darkest moments.

What I'm trying to say is, I'm so happy you got what I was going for, weren't turned off by the negativity and enjoyed the attempt at characterizing Pansy and Slytherin life!

Cheers and thanks again!


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