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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ok these past few chapters have been a massive rollercoaster. First there was that awkward thing between Albus and Flora in the bedroom and the whole book. I wanted to die of awkwardness. Iím kind of glad it didnít go ahead, I mean, Harry Potter was right next door and that might have been a little weird and that caused a little rift.

Then there was more awkwardness when Ginny was trying to talk to Flora and Flora couldnít reply due to eating and again I wanted to die. You may have gathered by now I hate awkward situations, itís probably because Iím in them a lot of the time so I can understand her pain. Then the whole issue of whether Scorpius was going to be able to go home or not and the permit and that was horrible for him.

Then when they finally managed to get home Draco wasnít there and that made me as scared as they were. When I saw all the mess I thought we were going to find Dracoís body underneath it all or something like that, so I got quite freaked out by that. Good old Albus suggesting they charged into the Ministry, I canít wait for that as I imagine itís going to be very exciting.

I really liked how we got to know more about Scorpiusí background as I always wondered how his mother died and it makes him background even more tragic. I like how the Malfoys really have fallen from their graces in this story as Iíve never seen it done before but it seems even more realistic than all the other suggestions about what happened to them. I have a feeling Dracoís been kidnapped or something as thatís the only possibility I can come with for his disappearance.

Another amazing few chapters :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad I'm messing with your emotions.

Oh, I understand the pain too. It's not so bad now I'm older, but when I was in my awkward adolescent phase I sincerely believed that I was put on this earth to be awkward, and spent many a sleepless night reliving the same awkward moments over and over again in my head. Flora's just suffering from that same angst. Realistically, I don't think Ginny, for example, would see her that way - Ginny would probably just see her as a sweet, rather shy girl - but in Flora's mind, the world's just her big awkward oyster.

I actually expand a bit more on Scorpius' background in the sequel - which I can see you've already started on! Apparently I can't write the Malfoys without some sort of tragedy, hey ho. If I don't divorce Draco and Astoria, I end up killing one or both of them off. In this story, I did the latter...

Thank you! Your reviews are so lovely and have given me so much to think about - I can't quite express my thanks enough ♥


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