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Review:patronus_charm says:
I think all authors are sadistic at one point or another so there’s no waving pitchforks from me, but wow Flora’s life is not going well at all.

I agree, timetabling your social life is a little weird but her Flora is weird so it’s almost expected of her. She and Albus continue to have the most random moments but they’re so cute. I think my favourite one was the look over breakfast and the way he eyed her breakfast and that had me cracking up.

I never expected Scorpius to start shouting at her like that. I mean, I guess it was sort of deserved as Scorpius’ life is a lot worse than hers at the moment but it was a little mean. This line cracked me up so much ‘‘No,’ I felt very small indeed. ‘I mean…inside. You’re hurting my heart.’‘ it’s bad to laugh at her hurting I know, but it was just the way it was delivered.

Then all the screaming and shouting from Flora was unexpected again. I do have a feeling that Scorpius does/did like her but the whole possessive idea Flora came up with I’m not too sure about. I knew she went too far bringing Fauna into this, but I never guessed that she would be standing there in the doorway. I wanted to die from the awkwardness of it all and I wasn’t even there.

What a massive cliff-hanger to leave us on! I’m so glad this is completed otherwise I would be dying inside with not knowing what happened next :D


Author's Response: Some authors are sadistic, but some are more sadistic than others. It's up to you whether I fall into the former or latter category.

I have to agree; I've never timetabled my social life. Once for school we had to make a timetable of how we spent our time during the average week, and I allowed roughly an hour for day for 'writing' because I was working on this fic quite a lot at the time, and all I got was raised eyebrows from my form tutor - 'seven hours a week writing? writing what? essays for school?' 'no miss, creative writing.' 'well, Julia, I rather think you should cut back on that.'

We'll see who's laughing when I don't win any awards for the books I'm never going to publish lbr.

Also, sometimes it lasts in love, but sometimes Fauna's nipped back from a lesson to take a quick shower before heading out to Astronomy Club and is actually standing right in the bathroom instead. I don't know why I'm paraphrasing Adele now. It may have something to do with the fact that it's two in the morning. Sleep is for the weak.

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