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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Hear for the Blue and Bronze review battle (team blue!!)

This is such a unique premise!! I'm so glad I decided to read it. It was a truly enjoyable chapter. I love the atmosphere you've created -- the separation of the genders, the overhanging Freudian context, the short quippy sort of language that you narrate with. It's all fabulous. And I love the characters as you've begun to develop them. Lysander was probably my favorite -- he's so endearing, but I almost always have a soft spot for puffs. :P

This is a very promising beginning and I look forward to reading chapter two!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!

This story was written for the No Romance challenge, so I decided to go a bit weird on it and give the main characters some Freudian overtones. (I blame psychology class!!) I'm glad you liked Lysander--he's quite a silly one, and very fun to write.

Thanks again for your review!! :)

~UnluckyStar57


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