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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Dear Meghna,

I've read this chapter about five times since I discovered the story, and it has only kept getting better. (I don't care if it hasn't ever been edited or anything.) It's a blooming good chapter at the beginning of a blooming good story, and it always makes me happy to read it.

Audrey reminds me a lot of myself. She isn't afraid to be a loner, and she doesn't especially care that she isn't a size zero. She's one-of-a-kind, and I really love the way you've written her. (Basically, she's a lot like me, but better!)

Hugo is awesome. I think he gets ignored a lot in fanfiction in his sister's wake, and you've obviously made that obsolete. He's much cooler than we think he is, and very brave as well. He and Audrey couldn't be a more perfect pair of friends.

The only constructive criticism that I have is to update this story if you can find the time. I know you're working on a new story, but I just love this one so much that I would hate to see it finished so suddenly!

With greatest sincerity,


Author's Response: omg i am not worthy of these lovely comments ;A; thank you so much! this story is kind of special to me because it's the first story i've written that's actually trying to get a message across.

i'm in no way done with it -- i have the next few chapters planned out but i haven't been able to find the time to write entire chapters. this is my first priority after i wrap up the bodyguard though. thank you so much for the support to keep writing, i definitely will not abandon this haha

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