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Review:patronus_charm says:
If I miss the next couple of Saturdays it’s due to all my exams happening the next week and the one after that, but I’ll probably get bored and come on here anyway :P

What is this line ‘He would surprise the Lord with Lily Evans’s death’ my jaw literally dropped when I saw it, I’m not even kidding. He can’t kill her, ok I know he can’t but the fact he’s planning it is horrible. Alrek is Voldemort 2.0 in the making. Then this line ‘The Mudblood would be dead by tomorrow morning’ he doesn’t even seem sorry about it and he tried to be friends with her in the beginning. Gah I hate him so much.

Thank goodness for the Alice/Frank fluff to brighten my mood as I was close to doing something dangerous to let me angry out about Alrek then. I think it’s so cute that they might move in together and I wasn’t even bothered that she was snooping. The irony of Lily’s thought though ‘Did people really buy houses this young?’ I couldn’t help but laugh as she got married and had a child really young too and she doesn’t know it yet. I’ve seen lots of reasons as to why they decided to get married young and I’m intrigued to see yours.

I’m actually disappointed that Alice, Belle and Lily aren’t moving in together. Now you mentioned the idea I’ve fallen in love with it. It would be as if the three witches were taking on the world together. Surprisingly, I’ve never seen a story where the Marauders all move in together and I can’t wait to see what trouble they cause. I guess I get part of my dream with Belle and Lily moving in together, but I wonder what will happen to theirs and Alice’s friendship as this is obviously going to cause a bit of a shift in it.

It’s really sad that I’m envious of Peter’s job. I’ve always loved history and if it’s history and magic combined it must be brilliant. I honestly don’t see why people complain about History of Magic it would probably be one of my favourite classes at Hogwarts :P

I have to give Alrek some credit as that plan was pretty ingenious given how easily the others all fell for it. I really liked the short snippet with James and Violet and how you just left it with them being alone together and it’s up to my imagination to figure out what happened next. How could you leave it like that? Who cares about eleven thousand word chapters, this anxiety about what he’s going to do to her is horrible. At least the one comfort I have is that he can’t kill her as that’s not canon ;)

Another amazing chapter, Jami! Now you’ve left me on this cliff-hanger I’ll probably be here for the next :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi Kiana ♥ I'm so excited for your exams to be over so you can get a break!! You deserve one, that's for sure.

Alrek is definitely a sneaky thing. He put on a good act in the start, trying to be friends to spy on the group, but now he's sort of unraveling.

Oh my gosh I didn't even realize how ironic that is! Wow! Good spotting, and now you've given me lots of Lily James feels! Haha! Something that has always made me really sad is when people having them get married because of the war stuff and it just basically being a, 'okay lets do it' thing and not because they just love each other so much. So I can definitely tell you it won't be the 'scared of the war' type of deal ;).

I absolutely agree about it causing a shift in Alice's relationship with the girls. They're so lucky they have magic so they can pop over much easier than us having to get in the car and drive, or take a train or bus!

Hahaha awww I'm happy that you connected with Peter's job! Some types of history I really enjoy learning about, then others just put me to sleep :P. WWII and Native American History are two of my favorites.

Hahahah I'm sorry for leaving it like that!! It was just SO LONG otherwise! The only reason I didn't feel quite so bad is, like you said, we know she can't actually die yet. A little suspense is good for the heart, right?:P

Well the next chapter will always be waiting for you, so don't stress if you get busy with exams!

I hope this response made sense. I'm half dead from exhaustion today, but your reviews are always so amazing that I can't help responding asap!

Thank you so much, Kiana ♥


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