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Review:patronus_charm says:
That was cutest, most adorable and most awkward thing ever. I never expected it to end up the way it did. I thought it was going to be an innocent little swim you know. I was just sitting there like this Albus, all his dad was go on walks with Ginny never anything like that but it was brilliant. I was squealing happily away and got more weird looks from my mum.

I feel proud of Flora as sheís really come into herself thanks to Albus and sheís so confident now and itís really lovely to be able to see that change. I dread to think what would happen next if they return to the bathroom and whatís going to happen tomorrow. That scene gave me so many feels and gah theyíre so cute and perfect for one another.

When Flora and Fauna were talking though I seriously wondered whether it could get any more awkward. There were two parts which have joint first place in the awkwardness scale. The first being when Fauna asked about why she wasnít talking to Scorpius anymore and I almost thought Flora was going to say why and I was insanely glad she didnít. Flora and Albus are too cute and canít break up. Then the second one was when she said that Flora had ink on her neck and Flora was just like itís not ink and then she had to put the pieces together.

The past two chapters have possibly been my favourite ones so far due to the feel inducingness of them!


Author's Response: I just realised that, in my last response, I went from discussing serious current affairs to making a Star Wars pun in the space of about a hundred words. I am so, so sorry.

Albus has a bit of a saucy (read: mean) streak that really comes out in these later chapters. It all starts when you take a dip with him in the Prefects' bathroom, and it just snowballs from there...

It was fun torturing Flora so much in this story. She's damned if she does, and she's damned if she doesn't. Just like everyone else I write, she can't catch a break. I'm glad my characters aren't real people, they'd probably murder me in my sleep for what I put them through.

Awh, thank you for saying so! :3

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