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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Swinging by for some review tag!

I absolutely love this story, it's so funny and wonderful. I never thought much about the ghoul in the attic, and it's so lovely to see him get some time in the fan fiction spotlight. Being the showman that he is, I'm sure he'd approve as well.

I like the idea of the ghoul being an aspiring actor, and the mention of the Ghoul Task Force was great. It's funny to think about ghouls as being self-governing within the wizarding world! I wonder what the experiences of other ghouls are like?

That being said, I'm still a little confused about what exactly a ghoul is... but liking it that way!

I really laughed at the bit about taking a bath once a decade, and Dorothy doomed to Knockturn Alley. Somehow that seems the type of place a ghoul would fit perfectly. The comment about the ever-growing Weasleys was quite funny as well. "The ginger clan," "their leader"... haha!

It's almost too bad the ghoul didn't get the chance to perform, or at least not that we know of. Perhaps you should write a sequel in which Umbridge or another law-enforcing and pleasant individual pays a call to the ginger clan looking for Ron?

My favourite line of this wonderful little story might have to be when George is dismayed at not having to force the ghoul into performing. So typical!

Great job with this, I really enjoyed it! :)

Author's Response: Aloha!

I'm so glad that you loved it as I had way too much fun writing it :P I never really thought about the ghoul either but the idea hit me in the middle of the night and I just ran with it. That's the beauty with minor characters as you can make them into anything you want!

The Ghoul Task Force is actually a thing in the HP world, it's like a division of the Ministry who make sure they behave. I could tell you a lot more but that would sound way too nerdy :P I think a ghoul is like a ghost/monster combined, well that's my mental image of one anyhow!

Yup now you mentioned Dorothy I'm so tempted to write her life story too *must resist urges*! The ghoul did get a chance to perform as the Death Eaters did visit the Weasleys but didn't go to close, I may get round to writing that scene one day if my ghoul muse hits again!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story and thank you for this wonderful review. I feel as if I blabbered a lot in my response so sorry about that! ♥

-Kiana


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