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Review:AlexFan says:
Oh. My. God. That is literally the only coherent thought in my brain right now. I'm amazed I've even managed to get this typed out. This reviewing is going to take a while because my brain is flipping out (not literally as that would be worrying but, anyway).

That was such a huge plot twist! I thought something must've been up because, I mean, why would you have anti-apparating charms on a cottage that was near werewolves that even though they took wolfsbane, something could still happen. I never dreamed that Dom's own boss (Delilah is her boss, though, right? I'm not going crazy?)

I actually did not expect it to be Delilah Jones. I'm assuming she did this so that she start the whole column with Dom about her own personal experiences about being a werewolf. I never expected her to be that greedy! Surely Ms Jones can be arrested for getting one of her employees purposefully attacked.

Moving on from what is one of the biggest plot twists that I've read in a while.

I really love how supportive Dom's family is. I don't know if I've mentioned this before but if I have I'm mentioning it again. You can really tell that she's close with her family and it's easy to see that her family really loves her. That's what a true family is, they love you no matter what!

I think Teddy is one of my favourite characters now. Before I really loved that he was so kind, caring and patient but now I also love that you showed he's not a pushover and that there are some things that he just won't put up with.

I think the pace of tour story is perfect, nothing is going too fast so the reader doesn't feel like they're "sprinting" through the chapter (if that makes any sense).

This is one of the most interesting stories that I've read on HPFF in a while and I'd reccommend this to just about anybody that I knew. I usually don't read stories like this or keep reading if I do come across stories like this because I just lose interest but the Worst is different.

Everything about this fanfiction is interesting. I personally think it's the way that you write and the way that you're portraying everything and the fact that this is a side of fanfiction that I've never seen before.

Anyway, this chapter was absolutely brilliant and I look forward to chapter 6!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing.

Aww I am so flattered this story had such an impact on you, thanks! *blush*

Haha I am glad you found this to be a 'huge plot twist'. Indeed, something was sure to be up. Yep, Delilah is her boss!

Sure she can be arrested, but let's see how Dom deals with it. And there may be some other reasons apart from the obvious ;)

Biggest plot twists that you've read in a while? OMG you flatter me so much. Thank you.

Indeed, family loves you no matter what, and I am glad that you can see it here =)

Teddy is human after all so of course he's bound to lose his temper every now and then, though he is indeed absolutely awesome xP

I am pleased you like the pace and think it's not too fast as I was worried about that. And yep it makes sense!

OMG most interesting stories that you've read on HPFF? You're really, really flattering me now. Thank you so, so much. You have no idea how much this review means to me. THANK YOU!

I am so happy that you like my writing style and such, thanks a million! YOU ARE AWESOME!! (Yes I couldn't resist using caps lock)! thank you!


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