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Review:patronus_charm says:
I got so excited when Scorpius kissed Flora. Though Iím definitely in the Florbus camp, I was glad to see that my theory was proved to be correct. I canít believe that they actually kissed though and it wasnít even through the spin the bottle game. I felt so bad for Flora though as this is effecting her so much.

Another thing I really liked is that your showing the muggleborn hatred coming back and the analogy of it in British society. Itís rather fitting considering whatís currently happening due to everything that happened in Woolwich. Itís nice to see that Albus cares a lot about the issue and he really reminds me of Harry so much.

I could sense the awkwardness between Albus and Flora when they were with Agnes. I have feeling a row/mini breakup may be on the cards for them or just awkwardness due to what happened between Flora and Scorpius. I hate seeing them like that as they really are cute together.

Fauna and Scorpius are going out? I never, ever saw that coming. I thought it was going to be Lucy and Scorpius or Rose and Scorpius but never that. This is just making their lives even more tangled. I think the strangest thing about it is that Scorpius has a girlfriend as heís so adorably awkward and if he got one I imagined it to be someone just as socially awkward not one whoís quite confident like Fauna.


Author's Response: Ah, yeah - regrettably, it has become topical now. I totally fail to understand the motives behind both the attackers and the EDL - usually I can find it within myself to see the situation from someone else's viewpoint and empathise with them, but I couldn't this time. While the attack itself was horrifying and sickening, I think the ensuing mobilisation of far-right groups was so wrong it had me physically shaking - but, alas, HPFF isn't the place for politics, so I'll stop there.

Back to lighter affairs - Fauna and Scorpius is a rather unlikely ship! Fortunately, it's rather short-lived. It's a sad fact widely known that I base a lot of my woobie Scorpiuses on myself, and a feature I've replicated in a lot of them is my barnacle-like ability to latch onto anyone who is nice to me, and my desperate need for ~deep trust~ in any sort of meaningful relationship. So this Scorpius has recognised that there are two girls in his life who are kind to him, respect him, and trust him, and he's mistakenly mistaken that for troo lurve and latched onto them both like barnacles. Like Luke Skywalker, he's looking for love in Alderaan places.

Thank you! ♥

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