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Review:patronus_charm says:
The awkwardness in the carriage was awful and I was so pleased when they separated as I really couldn’t handle it anymore. Then when he started leading her over to the Shrieking Shack and they made snow angels it was all so cutesy but I never anticipated what happened next.

You killed me with this line ‘Except I didn’t have to, because then he kissed me.’ Ah I was wrong about the date going horrible wrong it went brilliantly! I joined Fauna in the high pitched squealing when I read that bit. It probably wasn’t the best idea I ever had as I was in the living room with my mum who gave me a weird look, but it was worth it.

Gah now I’m going to have to come up with a ship and that’s always so hard. Florbus? Alora? I’ll just stick with Flora/Albus for now as it doesn’t sound anywhere near as weird as my suggestions. I was really surprised by Scorpius’ reaction as I thought he was going to do a mega freak out (she’s rubbing off on me ;) ) but he seemed quite cool about it, perhaps my theory about him liking her was wrong.

Another amazing chapter ♥

-KIana

Author's Response: For once, something in one of my stories didn't go badly! Ah, that scene was equal parts adorable and excruciating to write. I'm notoriously uncomfortable at writing any sort of romance, but this was a bit sweet so it wasn't as bad as some of the stuff I've grimaced whilst typing out.

Floral is the official name of the ship! (Captained by the Certifiably Awesome Jess The Enthusiast, nonetheless). Florbus is v. v. cute though, and Alora sounds like a girl's name. I personally ship Scorpius/Willoughby (Willoughpius) but I feel I may be in the minority.



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