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Review:patronus_charm says:
They kissed? I never saw that coming, well to be fair Flora probably didnít either. I usually hate this genre but youíve already turned me into a squealing fan girl over Flora and Albus and itís actually rather fun compared to the dark stuff I tend to read. Then the awkwardness of it all after happened was adorable and I was sitting there pitying both of them.

I knew that Flora would have a secret talent and itís nice to History of Magic is getting more love as Iím a big history nut so I donít see why everyone moans about having to go to it because I would be jumping for joy if I got a lesson like that.

Iím in love with Scorpius heís so adorable. I donít think Iíve called him that before but it really fits in this story. All your characters are so fresh and unique and itís really lovely to read. Iím not sure whether I like Lucy or not. Sheís annoying me at the moment but I have a feeling sheís going to change after a while.

I canít wait to read on :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Classic trope, that, the spontaneous diversionary kiss. I think if that happened to me in real life, though, I'd punch the person who kissed me.

And, don't worry - as you know by now, this fic isn't all sunshine and rainbows...

Eee me too! History was one of my best subjects at school, and I've always felt that the things I'm good at were very poorly represented on the Hogwarts syllabus (English Lit, Art, Music) so I would suffer there, and I sort of gave Flora that as well. Just so you know, Binns isn't teaching anymore in this fic. As much as I love History, I'm not sure I'd be able to stand an hour of Binns.

Thank you so much! ♥


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