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Review:marauder5 says:
This was so sweet! I loved the fact that Harry introduced the television to keep Ginny from getting too bored, and that George considered selling them in his shop. (Would they really work around magic, though? Isn't that why magical people don't use Muggle devices?)

Kreacher was a nice addition. I can definitely imagine him being proud to serve the Potters - after all, that is an honourable family name now, instead of Black. It was also really nice to have him plant the thought of James Sirius in her mind. I really liked that.

George and Angelina are brilliant! So glad to finally get to see the interaction between them :) Your portrayal of George, especially, is fantastic - he sounds just like the George we all know and love. As for the baby names, I'm surprised they didn't think of at least James after they had mentioned naming him after a deceased family member. But I guess they were distracted by George, right?

And then I guess we saw the first of James' actions! I loved how you had him stopping them from fighting. It was really sweet :) Ron and Ginny right before the wedding also made me go 'aww', because it reminded me so much of my own relationship with my big brother. You really nailed that sibling love, I think.

As ever, I can't wait for the next chapter! This one was another great one to add to the collection. I love this story and I hope you're proud of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my first story longer than a one shot, so it is close to my heart. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I adore my twins, and writing a healing, happy George makes me smile. Ron and Ginny share that same temper, but they're always going to make up. You're probably right about the movies and magic, but I thought it was only mentioned that muggle devices didn't work at Hogwarts. Either way, I couldn't resist. Bed rest sucks, and I would never have survived without movies! I appreciate your review so much. The lady few chapters will be up soon!~GW

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