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Review:marauderfan says:
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This was a very unique story, I really liked it. I thought you captured Dudley's character very well. He's obviously grown up a bit by this point and it was nice to see that he's got his own view of magic now. And it was great that Dudley and Harry seemed to be friends at the end!

LOVED the dancing scene. Poor clueless Dudley. And Vernon and Petunia were spot on.

I thought the end was clever - having them get stuck in the box, but I did wonder about Vernon and Petunia - they would have been gone for a number of years, and I'd think that someone would seriously worry.

(Also, you mentioned the dementor incident sort of offhand and it got me to thinking- what did Dudley see when the dementors attacked him? Then again, I know it really has nothing to do with the story, so it's fine that it's not included. It just made me wonder, that's all)

Great work on this, it was a very entertaining read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

It was fun working out the dancing scenes. :)

That is a point. I'll have to think about if I can add in worry about them being gone so long. I've added a note so I won't forget.

I wondered the same thing, especially since Harry made a point of wondering what Dudley had seen in OOTP. I found the answer - because Dudley was so spoiled and had no bad memories, the Dementors made Dudley see himself as he truly was.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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