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Review:PitchBlue says:

I sort of randomly came here and your title/banner immediately captured my interest, so I decided to read!

Wow. Just, wow. Your descriptions are so amazing and detailed, as if they're breathing in a way (I know this sounds very weird, but it feels that way). I particularly liked your description of winter, because it's my favourite season and you wrote it so well.

It's the first time I've read a chapter with little dialogue that still manages to be absolutely brilliant. Not that I don't like descriptions, I just think that it takes a very good author to get it right. And you got it exactly right.

When I read something like this I get very sad because English is not my native language, and I will never be able to write something that has the same richness. *wallows in self-pity for a moment*

But anyway, my favourite sentence would probably be:

"In winter, when it was dark, it seemed eternal."

It just seems like it would totally fit in one of those subtitle-pics from alternative movies, or with a black and white picture of something abstract. *try to contain my innner hipster*

Anyway, I kind of loved your chapter. Or adored it.
Yeah okay, I thought it was unbelievably brilliant.

I'm going to shut up now to prevent myself from further embarassment.


Author's Response: Eee, thank you so much! I kind of amped the descriptions up to eleven in this fic - I think my writing is usually very dialogue-heavy, so it's nice to have a break and write lashes and lashes of description now and again :3

Baha! I understand - I can totally see the black-and-white photo of the mysterious forest, Lucy wandering down the middle, the quote at the bottom. I do have a fic tumblr, I should consider creating this and posting it there. But, alas, there are only so many hours in the day.

Awh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it and thank you for leaving such a lovely review ♥

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