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Review:BellaFan202 says:
Hi! So glad you requested this! Ah!

This was so good. I feel like you captured Draco perfectly. This was absolutely perfect and fit in well with what JKR wrote. I even went and read the part in OotP where the DA members hex and jinx Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle and it fit in so well with the book.

I feel like the way Narcissa and Draco react is great. Fear, not respect. Obedience, not trust. It feels so real to me.

I don't really even have any constructive criticism to offer, sorry. :/ But I guess that's a good thing for you. :P

That's about all I have to say. Thanks for requesting this and don't forget to request the next chapter whenever it's published! :)

~BellaFan202~

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story. It is an interesting challenge to write a dark wizard/witch as the protagonist.

I have a small collection of dark wizards/witches that I plan on writing about to start with. I do have one that will be ready soon - the story needs a little more polish.

I will certainly request when the next chapter has been validated.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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