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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Four in a row! I'm so proud of myself!

So, this chapter was good as well, I feel you have the reactions of the Weasley clan down to a T. They are all acting very canon-ly, which is something I love, so well done there.

Rita Skeeter strikes again! You would think that she would be a bit more careful, seeing as Hermione knows her secret, but oh well. Maybe later in the story we'll see her secret revealed! That would make me feel happy. Still, just a suggestion.

Just some quick advice, I saw you said that Bill lost his battle with laughing, as he shut the door, but you never mentioned him finding anything funny before that, so maybe you could just put in a quick sentence before that about how he was trying his best not to laugh. Just a suggestion!

All in all, a great chapter that I enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note to fix Bill's losing his battle with laughing. Thank you for catching that!

Unfortunately, Rita gets away - for the moment. Especially given the current status at the Ministry with Voldy rising to power. :(

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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