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Hi there! :)
When I saw that you've written a one-shot about Frank and Alice, I didn't even see what other stories you've written (don't throw stuff at me!). I always love to write about minor characters and congratulate others who are trying to write them. =] I myself have written about Viktor Krum who isn't really written around her, so first of all congrats! :D

Secondly, I loved the basic idea of your plot. The way you unfolded the plot before us was amazing. Though we don't really know about Alice, she seemed to be canon and perfect. I mean she was exactly what I had imagined her to be. Neville is the perfect combination of characters don't you think so? :) The allusions were like icing on the cake. =]

I just noticed a few typos and spelling errors here and there, but they are negligible. So you could just go through the chapter once or twice and correct them. =]

Good job!
Ashwini :D

Author's Response: Hello! I'm not mad at all, I'm glad you chose this one-shot as it's my newest work and definitely needs some feedback, as well as being very close to my heart! :)

I love writing and reading about minor characters as well, it gives you so much freedom and experimentation! I'm so glad you liked Alice's characterization, she just came to life in my head and I knew exactly how I wanted to portray her.

Thank you very much for such a wonderful review! :)

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