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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
YES! THREE CHAPTERS IN A ROW! Woot. Be proud of me, be very proud. Are you proud?

I loved the way that you wrote Rufus Scrimgeour, the way he was constantly thinking about the things he had to do and politics, even while writing a birthday card, haha.

The Weasleys were so sad! It was just heartbreaking, especially Molly. You really made me feel sorry for them, having to deal with Harry and Ginny dying. *breaks down* I liked the way you wrote Minerva McGonagall as well, she was very canon.

Ooh, what's Charlie up to? Why did he marry Tamsin without letting his family know? By the way, I loved Molly and Arthur's reactions to the 'news', thinking she was pregnant. "Is she in trouble?" haha.

One thing, I think in a previous chapter you wrote Fleur with a French accent, but in this chapter you haven't, I would just suggest going back and making sure that they're all the same, as in she talks all the time without an accent, or all the time with an accent, but it should be uniform to give a better effect.

Overall, great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added your questions about Charlie to my file and will figure out the answers. :)

Arthur and Molly's reactions are based off on of Ron's statements to Hermione about scarlet women. I think it was in their 4th year.

I'll go back and change her speech to include an accent as her accent carried through the series. Thank you for catching it!

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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