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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hey, -BookDinosaur- here with your requested review!

Nice chapter you have here, I liked the way you wrote Gawain and Thaddeus as they went to survey the warzone. I also liked their attitudes and comments during the meeting with Petunia, I found it believable and funny-the wiping shoes thing made me laugh.

I do think, however, that Petunia was a bit out of character here, in the past chapters you portrayed her as a bit friendly and even kind towards Harry, but here she is very standoffish and has a 'I-never-wanted-anything-to-do-with-him' kind of attitude. If this sudden change in attitude is because she blames Harry for the destruction, maybe you could just let us know with a paragraph or so in her POV.

Other than that, great chapter, spelling and grammar immaculate as always and I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note to expound on Petunia's attitude towards Harry. Her attitude does change abruptly.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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