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Review:PitchBlue says:
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I liked your introduction, it was very descriptive and immediately set the atmosphere. You chose an interesting moment to describe.

I think your take on Draco is very good - you've captured him well. Especially with those remarks as 'Saint Potter', it gives the chapter something extra. It's also interesting how you describe the changing sentiments to his friends, well done there.

I found this a very good sentence:

"His skin crawled being so close to her and he detested that she ruined his image of a grown man with her dragging him along as if he were a child in her delight to serve her master."

Just brilliant. You give a very strong description of Bellatrix with just one sentence.

So, I really enjoyed reading this, I'm curious about the other one-shots!

- PB

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

It has been interesting writing these stories with the protagonist being someone not necessarily considered good.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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