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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hey there! So this is going to be my 300th review so I'm gonna make it a good one! :)

First of all, I am a huge sucker for Rose/Scorpius pieces, and this one is no exception. The thing that really pulled me in was the fact that they weren't together at all, really, until the very end. The flashbacks worked phenomenally as well; they were all in just the right spots to make it seamless with the currently happening plot. I do think the scene where Rose and Xander (love that name!!) break it off is a little awkward and rushed, but that's just me.

You have fantastic skill with writing, and plot ideas. I'm so jealous of you! It seems so flawless and easy for you to just whip stuff out like this that's like perfect! The idea to have Rose, Dom, and Albus as the next generation trio was brilliant, and I think very plausible since they were all in the same year. I have always held the notion that Rose would be a Ravenclaw and not a Gryffindor simply because she got more of her mother's genes than her father's. With Scorpius, I feel like he could go either way, Slytherin or Ravenclaw, just depending on how his character is developed. You developed him well as a Ravenclaw, so kudos to you. :)

Overall, a wonderful little Scorose short story! I love your stuff, it's all very good. Great job! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

Author's Response: Aw, thank you Madi I feel so honoured I get your 300th review ♥

Haha, I love Scorose too, and writing this made me start a Scorose novel despite it making me having four WIPs. I thought it would be fun to make them not together as it was a bit of a twist from the usual Scorose. I'm so glad that you liked the flashbacks, and I agree that scene was a little rushed I just haven't found the time to go back to it, but I will one day!

*blushes* your compliments are too kind :') I'm not really sure where the idea of the Golden Trio version 2.0 came about, it just sort of happened when I was writing it! I'm so glad that you felt he was developed as a Ravenclaw as that was the thing I was most unsure of!

I'm so glad that you liked it, it means so much to me to hear that! Thank you for this amazing review and the lovely compliments :') ♥

-Kiana


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