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Review:SweetInferno says:
Sweetinferno here to review!

The plot, so far, seems like a interesting and one I have never read before. Though I would have liked to have seen more of why she wanted to take on the werewolf story. To me it seemed nicely paced and easy to read. You kept a good line between action and word play especially when she is packing her stuff together to leave the hut.

Dom's personality was fairly executed, you made sure her personality showed through all the excitement and made sure everyone knew she was not perfect, one major thing it takes to make a character appear believable.

There was no major grammar problems that I could see which is superb!

The story kept my interest and it didn't seem jumpy or frozen, you kept me right along with Dom'.

Keep up the really good work!
Sweetinferno

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you find the plot interesting! More on her article and stuff will be told in the future chapters. I am pleased you found it nicely paced and easy to read, and enjoyed the action with descriptions.

It's great to know that Dom's personality showed through, and it was believable. No grammar problems makes me so relieved. It kept your interest? Yay thanks!

Thank you!


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