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Review:Oboeliviate says:
Wow. Just wow. After reading all three of your stories in the space of three days, all I can say is wow. I adore how all of your characters, with the majority of them being completely unrelated to those in the books, are so well written and characterized. The moments with the first years are so brief, but one still gets an ominous feeling that this is just the calm before thestorm. I did wonder about there not being any girls in Slytherin during their first year, but now I'm just wondering where they are? I beg of you, please finish this story! This story is one of a kind in it's originality and it would be a shame for it to join the many other stories that coluld have become something amazing, but are instead abandoned. You are an extremely talented writer and I hope to read more of your work either here, or on another site with some orginal fiction.

Author's Response: Thank you!

I can't even begin to imagine how much of your life I've just taken up over the last few days, and glad I haven't just wasted it!

This isn't abandoned, don't worry: just on pause - as mentioned at the end of LEBS, I couldn't decide which sequel to write first, and wrote the first few chapters of each concurrently, before settling on the storyline of Snake Bites.

I'm also somewhat handicapped by having a full-time job at a boarding school, and then using up most of my free time as a sports coach. Consequently, in the summer term, not very much gets written, but Snake Bites is only a few chapters from the end, and then Snakes and Ladders will get more attention. It might take until 2015, but it will get there!

I'd love to hear more of your thoughts on the other two stories - particular characters, plot twists or events that work or don't work, things you'd like to see more (or less) of, or simply favourite moments!

Thanks again,


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