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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hey! -BookDinosaur- here with your requested review! See, I'm not always terribly late! ;)
I loved Azkaban, it was written so well and it was so creepy. Carrow was written perfectly as well, this shows some of the hard-heartedness and cruelty Hogwarts is in for.
Your Patronus was good as well, I love how you used it to directly repel the effect the Dementors were having on Mr. Nott.
Speaking of your characters, I feel you wrote them as perfectly as always here. I liked Draco especially, it is true that he would have a lighter, more carefree side, it was just never displayed in the HP books.
I'm worried for Theo, though. For and Pyxis seem worried, and that's enough for me to be worried. Is it odd that I trust the judgement of your characters so much?
Is Pyxis going to be let in on Tor and Terry's secret? Exciting development here!
I feel that the use of heavy foreshadowing in this chapter was very effective and well written.
And then the last part! Within two years one of them will be dead?! Is it... Daphne? Theo? It could be anyone!
I'm slightly disappointed that my dream of the Great Mouse Killing Machine won't come true though. :P
Anyway, a great chapter that left me wanting more.

Author's Response: Hi! :)

I'm glad you liked this chapter, and thought Azkaban was well portrayed. While I'd never want to actually go there, I loved imagining how Tor would perceive it. I'm happy you enjoyed the addition of Carrow, and you're right, Hogwarts is in for a tough time under her tyranny.

I'm glad you thought the characterization was good! :) I wanted to let them have a fun time, especially after Pyxis and Theo had to go through that ordeal. I'm so happy you're trusting the judgement of the characters, it makes me happy! :) And you'll just have to keep reading and find out all the answers to these questions!

As for your dream, well, there's always next chapter! :P

Thank you so very much for another lovely review! :D


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