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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here with your much-too-late requested review! I'm sorry! *hides in a corner, clutching a book*

Well, I really like this story. And not just the story, but the idea of it. I've never actually read a story concentrating on the lives of the next-gen kids as adults, so major kudos for you there.

I really liked the characterisation you had of Rose, she seemed like such a loving, caring mother, and that really suits her.

One thing I didn't quite get was Rose and Scorp's relationship. Are they fighting or something? Is that why she was so cold to him?

I feel that the dream was good, you managed to create a sense of mystery and suspense there, it made me want to read and find out more about it.

My CC for you would just be to read through this chapter again, there were a couple of grammatical mistakes there.

Overall, a good chapter I enjoyed reading and made me want to read more. :)

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