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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi Bec, here for the Gryffie review exchange! This was a really, really good chapter!

I loved the way you started us out in her classroom. I enjoy watching her teach as well as the details you make up surrounding what she has to teach. I think she does an awesome job with getting things started and balancing being a nice teacher but still strict enough to keep things going.

Her thoughts regarding the Ravenclaw Slytherin class made me giggle. I can't imagine that being an easy class. We know that both Houses can be quite the know it alls, but it was nice to learn that Slytherins have toned it down since Harry's time at school. And, well, hers too I suppose :P!

I was really curious where you were going with the build up of the student liking to transfigure human parts. With the essay I thought it was just a fun detail, then when the teapot came about I figured you had something up your sleeve.

However, I did NOT expect a Cedric flashback :(! That was so sad but really well written. I think keeping the fact that this girl did see horrors alive is so important, and you really places the reminder perfectly here. His body transformed so smoothly that I could feel her pain, and i just wanted to hug her!

The hospital wing scene was also really well done. I liked that her first concern was for her student. The only thing I wasn't crazy about that section is when McGonagall says she doesn't know what happened, because her next sentence shows she does know. It was really heart wrenching, but it wasn't hard to figure out why Emily had broken down, so it was just odd that McGonagall doubted the reasoning she told Emily.

The arrival at home felt just right. Relief, the annoyances of parents, then ending it on such a soft note when her mother says it's lovely to have her back.

All in all a really awesome chapter!

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