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Review:HorseMad99 says:
Hi, it's your requested reviewer,
Firstly I love how she described Regulus 'and he was dead cute, and dead but who really cared about such trivial things' it was very funny and the pun was good.
'Aren't you the bloke who died trying to destroy that horcrux, but didn't quite make it?' this shows really well that she is quite a blunt character and unafraid to speak her mind.
I love how sarcastic Regulus was when he said 'No, I've just been roaming around the place for the past 40 or so years, walking through walls, never ageing and being ignored by the general population and I still think I'm alive' he's sassy too. I love his character so far and I'm really interested to find out what part he will have to play later on.
'Oh nothing, just talking to Regulus Black' I love how she says this and obviously Albus thinks she is joking but in actual fact she is telling the truth. I can really imagine his reaction when/ if she finally tells him and I can imagine him just saying 'so you really were talking to Regulus Black?!'
I also love how when Regulus tells her that he is going to help her, her first reaction is 'Does the guy want to help me with me potions homework?'
It really made me laugh when Regulus started talking about the free wifi and when he said, 'I have been dead for forty years, Ellie. Death can get pretty boring if I can't live stream the latest episode of Doctor Who' I swear this is exactly what I am going to be like when I die.
'TTYL' did he really just say that?! I think I'm a shocked as Ellie, I suppose it's because the Black family was always quite traditional and it's just really strange to read about him knowing about and using wifi etc.
'being a complete noob when it came to social situations where sarcasm wasn't functional, my brain shut down and left me alone to flounder through' though I don't particularly like the choice of word with 'noob' I really like the rest of the phrase, it's really relate able and made me giggle.
'But not before before she hit me right in the feels' that pretty much sums up my whole existence.
I really liked this chapter, it was just as good as, if not better than the last. The humor and sarcasm worked really well and I really want to read on!
Feel free to re-request when you have posted the next chapter.
Beth :)

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for taking so long to reply to this!

Ellie and Regulus' relationship is just a lot of fun to write. They're both very endearing and likeable (I hope!) characters in their own way, and I love writing them together, because they're so different, yet still very much the same.

Chris takes a lot of things about Ellie in his stride - which shall be further explored. Peole are curious about him, and there's a lot more to him than meets the eye.

I'm glad to hear that Ellie's awkwardness is so relateable! That was on purpose - we've all been there.

Thanks for the wonderful review, and I shall make sure to request for the next chapter!

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