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Review:nott theodore says:
Hey Kiana!

I've actually been meaning to come and read this for a few days because the ideas you mentioned about parodies were really funny, and this chapter certainly lived up to my expectations. It was a very dry, sarcastic humour but you wrote it really well and I couldn't help laughing all the way through.

Your characterisation of Rita Skeeter is brilliant! I can definitely imagine her meeting up with Cho and Lavender and plying them with drink in order to get a story that she wanted. All of her thoughts were really in-keeping with her canon character; I liked the fleeting feeling of guilt which she then cast away, showing she was still human but much more determined to write the expose than protect the girls' feelings.

Cho and Lavender - I'm not sure it's the best idea for them to be together, but it's comedy gold here. I love the idea of Lavender mourning over the loss of a cover girl role without her 'Won-Won' and Cho clutching a little Harry doll, claiming that Ginny had been feeding him with a love potion!

There was just one small typo I noticed:
"moaning over our ex's" -- exes

What I loved about this is that I can really tell you had a lot of fun writing it, and that comes across when I read. Let me know when you add another chapter!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Hey Sian!

Haha, I'm so glad that you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write as I have quite a sarcastic brain and I could actually put that into my writing without looking too weird, so it's great that you found it funny too.

I'm so glad that you loved Rita, as I always loved her in the books due to her eccentricties so it was great to show it here. I had to include the guilt because she is somewhat human at times and it was interesting to see her have a different emotion as opposed to determination.

Throwing those two together probably wasn't the best idea as they're doing more harm than good. I would like to think that it's Lavender pulling Cho because in my head she's the weirder one of the two.

I'm not surprised there was a typo, I edited this in ten minutes to get it into the 0 hour queue and I've never got around to checking it again!

I'm so glad that you liked it and I'll let you know when the next one's up! Thanks for the great review :)

-Kiana


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