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Review:Lululuna says:
This was a really great chapter, possibly the best yet I think! :) I really like the characterization of Pansy, and how well she fits with the Pansy we know from the books plus some added tribulations and adulthood. The overdone girlyness and enthusiasm, the cruelty and calculation lurking beneath the surface, the expectation to be obeyed... it was perfect. I also loved Daph's observations of the marks Azkaban left on Pansy, and the obvious tensions and wariness between the two old friends. You told a whole story of two lives in a few short words, so well done! :)

I wonder what Pansy wants with poor Eleanor, and I'm very excited for the meeting and what will go down. Theo is so great as well-in the books he's more haughty, at least through Harry's eyes, but I enjoy this light-hearted, relaxed side of him. And Astoria is as entertaining as always, of course. Great job as usual! :)

Author's Response: Ooh the best yet? Wow thankyou! This was originally the first half of the next chapter, so it's good to hear that it doesn't come off too filler...

I love that you like Pansy, and that her characterisation comes off well- it was difficult getting the balance (like you say) of her girlishness and her viciousness. And I can't say how glad I am that the story of Daphne and Pansy feel realistic.

I'm aware that my Theo is a bit different from book-Theo, but my excuse is that we only really see him through Harry's eyes in the books so yeah- I'm glad you liked him. And Astoria.

Thankyou very much for another wonderful review! ♥


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