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Review:Lululuna says:
Another great chapter, and I'm really excited to find out what happens next. I like Daphne more and more as a character, and her self-acknowledgement that being around Pansy changes her. Very curious for this meeting they're having, and the fact that Pansy and others were in prison. I wonder how they got released, and who else will be attending!

I feel like I can root for Daphne and Theo a little more now, since I've seen some of their interactions and friendship. They seem very cute together, and I'm glad Daph has a friend who understands what she's been through and to (hopefully) take a stand with her against Pansy. I enjoyed his line about respecting Malfoy at school, and their acknowledgement of the links with the other Slytherins. It was very smoothly written and naturally integrated.

Astoria is so funny, I loved how she was sneaking tastes of food when Daphne wasn't looking. I love the sister dynamics, and feel as if you've really brought all these characters to life. Good job, and I'm looking forward to what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm glad that you're feeling curious, and that you're liking Daphne as a character! I really enjoyed creating the relationship between her and Pansy, as it's quite a complex one.

Haha I'm glad you're rooting for Daphne and Theo now! I'm not terribly good at writing three dimensional male characters, so I'm pleased that they work together.

Oh I'm so glad you like Astoria- and the bit where she sneaks the tastes of food! This is quite a character-y chapter, so hearing that they all seem lifelike is actually wonderful! ♥

Until next time!

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