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Review:Lululuna says:
Is it strange that reading your story makes me hungry? Banana nut muffins would be just great right now... ah well.

I'm very curious about the letter! I was wondering how Daphne fit in with her fellow Slytherins, since she does seem pretty different. I loved the lines about how she doesn't want them to know something she doesn't, it really fit well and created a great deal of suspense.

I really enjoy the descriptions of Daphne's mum, and feel like I can picture her precisely. I like the sisters being a united front against their mother- and pureblood society for that matter. The insult about "consorting with Muggles" just showed how many values haven't changed since the war.

I'm very curious about what's going on in Daphne's head. She seems so amazing, and deserves to see herself that way as well. Guess I'll just have to keep reading! :) Another lovely chapter!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you like the food descriptions! They're some of my favourite bits to write!

Ooh I'm glad you're curious about the later- I nearly explained what was in it in this chapter, but decided that it would be more fun for there to be a wait! I can promise a *lot* more on how Daphne fits in with her fellow Slytherins, as she is pretty different from them.

Well Daphne and Astoria had to have something in common - even if it's a shared disdain for their mother! I reckoned that while the war would change public attitudes to Muggles and Muggleborns, private ones would probably be quite similar, and also that Daphne and Astoria's generation would be a bit more accomadating than their mother's...

Thank you so much for this review! It was so lovely to read! ♥

-Bethany


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