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Review:HandofGlory says:
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I'm not too much of a romance genre reader, but this one is different.

I don't feel that Teddy would be someone else, especially another Weasley, and adding the fact that it is Victoire's sister! I feel a little bad for Dominique, she had a great time with her love, who is now going to be her brother in law.

I didn't think it would have been a mutual ending, I thought this would be Dom telling Teddy about it, and him taking it badly, and not him going to end it with her as well!

Good story, there are some spelling mistakes throughout the story, but I liked the story.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing this, especially since you're not much of a romance person (though this is more of romance-angst).

Teddy is a jerk here, yeah. *sigh* Poor Dominique, I am an evil author to make her suffer! (Psst, if you read the sequel to this which is called Betrayal, you'll know what happened after - I don't want to give away any spoilers).

Yeah well I thought it would be best if they both broke up, after all Teddy did propose to Victoire.

I am glad you liked the story, thanks. When I go back and edit, I'll surely try to correct any spelling mistakes I find!

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