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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag.

Ah this was definitely a great start to your story. I like your plot, it seems interesting and sweet. Daphne seems to be a likeable character so far and I like how you've given us all this information about her through her thoughts in the chapter. It feels like I know her quite a bit already which is good =) I am curious to see how things would go between Theo and her, and also what will happen with Astoria's arrival.

So far, you've set the scene well and introduced the whole scenario nicely. I enjoyed this chapter and hope to come back for the next. Great job!

Keep writing!
9/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. I love the name 'Pink Hippogriff' xD

Author's Response: Hello there!

I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed this beginning! Developing a plot is something I find really difficult, so it's great that the start of it works well!
It's wonderful that Daphne comes across as likable, and that you feel you've got to know her a bit. There should be much more on her, Theo, and Astoria in the next chapter!

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter :)

-Bethany

Ooh brilliant! I'm actually not entirely sure where the name came from, but it's great to know that people like it!


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