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Review:marauder5 says:
Okay, so the family bonds in the beginning of this chapter are great! Seeing Victoire and Dominique kind of makes me wish I had a sister, haha... (although my brother is quite great as well, I guess!) ;) It's good that Dominique has them to rely on. But I don't know, I think I'm with Victoire in regards of the procedure. Things COULD still change somehow. I'm not sure exactly how that would be, but what if they'd find a way to keep werewolves from transforming, so that she'd be able to carry a child? Okay, it might not be very likely. So maybe this is for the best.

Teddy losing his temper was expected. I think they both handled it well, though. They seem like such a strong couple, so I'm sure that they'll survive this.

But man, this Delilah Jones character.. I don't know if SHE will survive. Why did she do this? I have so many questions.. but hopefully, you will answer them in the upcoming chapters. This was a really good one, filled with drama, and then that little twist at the end! I definitely want more :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad to see that you're still reading my story!

I am pleased you liked the family bonds, I thought after all it was time to show some familial affection =) Haha I have an elder sister too and she's amazing so Victoire may just be a tad bit like her ;) Dominique definitely has her family with her yeah. Well, the procedure is done now so sadly nothing can change anymore. I do like your speculation though.

Indeed, I figured it was time for Teddy to get annoyed, he's only human after all. They'll definitely survive it =)

Delilah is really something isn't she? Don't worry all your questions will be answered in future chapters. I am glad you liked this one with all its drama and the twist. The next one will be up before the end of June (still going with the once-a-month policy)!

Thank you!


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