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Review:marauder5 says:
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This was so great! The simplicity of it made it all the more touching. Descriptions are great in all their honour, but it's pieces like this one that really hit home. This was my favourite part: "He had seen.

He had watched.

He had beared witness.

He had committed."

It gave me chills! It was so perfectly written! It doesn't have to be more complex than that to say what you really want to say.

I also imagine Astoria healing him in a way, so that was great! The ending was absolutely perfect, as well. All in all, this was beautiful and poetic (and really impressive. I'm sure I wouldn't be able to write something so perfect in so few words! You should be proud of yourself for succeeding!)

Should you try something like this again! Yes, of course! It takes quite some talent to be able to pull it off. I also think you've managed to weave the quote into the story extremely well. Sometimes, it can feel a bit forced, but that certainly wasn't the case here. I can tell that you let the quote inspire you instead of just trying to make it fit into the story.

And to answer your final question, yes it was so amazing that you should adopt this new writing style! Haha! I would definitely be interested in reading something similar written by you! Good job!! :)

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! The quote really was inspirational, and as an avid watcher of the show, and #1 Ood fan, I think this is what the quote really is about: endings and beginnings.

In my head, Astoria was a bit of a healing salve to Draco's wounds, so I thought it fit in well with the piece. And that line is one of my faves too!

I get the poetry thing a lot. It was completely unintentional except for the rhythm, but any other poetic feels was just a happy coincedence!

I'm glad that you didn't think the quote was forced. I know what you mean by that, and I was a little scared of that happening, so it's nice to hear that it didn't!

I dunno if I'll ever write something like this again. It was a pretty intense piece to write, and I don't know where I could get inspiration for a story that fits this kind of style! But thanks so much for the encouragement! It was really appreciated! :D

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