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Hi Courtney! :)
I know that I've already let you know that I read and enjoyed this, but still I wanted to review and tell how much I enjoyed your story. =]

I'm a huge fan of mysteries and the mysterious disappearance of Victoria Heron brought me here. I didn't really get what the plot was in the first chapter but then the plot became thicker.

I especially liked every character in this story. They were so original and different from each other. You did a really good job in handling so many characterizations at once. Their thought processes and behaviours were always perfect. =]

I know that Tori was kind of bad and everything but I liked her more than Charlie. I can't tell you the reasons, but maybe because she was the one with the mysterious background and I love mysteries? I don't know. She was absoulutely original. Her last chapter was the best one. :( I wish she had survived. Albus would've married her and James would've been happy with Charlie. Albus and James would've been friendly with each other. *sighs*

I just thought that you should have connected Charlie and Tori in more ways. I thought it would've been very nice if Charlie was actually investigating Tori's disappearance. But still it's pretty awesome. :)

The epilogue was nice but I was hoping James and Albus would make up. Harry's kids are the most darling kids for me and it was odd to see them here in different avatars. Though it was sort of nice. A new experience you know?

Anyways, this was a good story and I really enjoyed it! I hope you'd have some time for a sequel! :)

Ashwini

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm sorry at how slack I've been at replying - I haven't had much time for fanfiction recently, but I'm definitely back now. Yay!

I'm really glad you liked the characters - Tori, especially was a lot of fun to write, mainly because she was just so unpleasant and definitely had a dark and mysterious sort of story line, like you mentioned.

I felt bad about leaving James and Albus fighting, actually, but I really didn't want this story to have a completely happy ending, as terrible as that sounds! But I'm glad you enjoyed the epilogue anyway.

Thank you again!

Courtney:)


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