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Review:navyfail says:
it was a DREAM! :O
I am in absolute shock right now and just...gah.
My OTP for life! *sobs*

This was a great story from beginning to end. I really liked your descriptions and how you worded Rose's emotions. Albus was a dear and Hugo was sweet yet clueless.

Favorite part:
"Scorpius's face morphs and I try to look away, but instead of shock or anger, his whole body displays unattributable joy. He jumps to the air with a loud Yes!"

Heartbreaking Part:
"I am sorry, Rose... but they... they just got married."

All in all, it was a lovely one-shot. :)

~Sama

p.s. I was wondering if Scorpius ever did have feelings for her?

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Indeed it was a dream xP *hugs*

I am pleased you liked the story with its descriptions and emotions. This is not one of my best pieces but I am glad you liked it nonetheless including Hugo and Albus!

Haha your favourite part is a bit funny, and the heartbreaking one is sad indeed. To answer your question, Scorpius did harbour feelings for Rose back in school, and maybe some of those feelings lingered, but in the end he loved Lily more, and thus chose to marry her =) It was nothing like Rose's dream xP

Thanks for your lovely words!


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