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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey there! You updated, yay xD

I loved this chapter! I am liking your descriptions quite a lot, you're giving us enough detail to visualise the setting and the people, and yet not so much that it gets boring, and that's great.

I am so worried for Rose and Krum now, ghosh. I liked the way you showed in the beginning the tension between the two, showing that all's not well in the paradise. Then, the part about the hysterics gave me a little shock, why did she break down like that? I hope it will be explored further in future chapters.

The ending definitely surprised me. I surely didn't expect something of this sort to happen so soon. But oh dear, what's going to happen next? Did Rose really see her brother Hugo? Who's the man heading for her? What are they going to do with her?

Ah so many questions. I am quite excited for the next chapter already xD As always, a brilliant piece of writing!

There was one typo I noticed by the way: in the last section it says "she nearly cried the name allowed" but I presume it should be "aloud" and not "allowed"?

Apart from that, this made for a smooth read!!

Great going! Keep writing!
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks, AD! I'm so glad you liked the descriptions. Since the setting is pretty important to the plot, I tried really hard to set the scene as early as possible, but I'm glad it didn't cross the line into boring.

Rose's breakdown and the ongoing tension between her and Krum will definitely be explored in future chapters. I'm so happy that what was included here was enough to pique your interest.

This story will definitely move at a faster pace than the first, and I'm so excited it seems to have gotten your wheels turning already. Hopefully the mystery of who the man is won't be a disappointment.

Yikes! Thanks for pointing out that typo. I fixed it as soon as I saw your review. Thank you so much for the R&R. I really appreciate it!!


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