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Review:PitchBlue says:
Yaaay, another chapter! I'm still excited.

So, I thought this was great. I like it that you take time to portray every-day events, as it makes the characters seem more realistic. As always, I love Tonks' inner monologues and comments, they're brilliant.

The way you show how Remus' behaviour changes when he gets to know someone is really interesting and well done. I like the little bits of foreshadowing - how his face fell when Tonks said she was going on a date.

A few favourite quote:
"It was quite a nice cat, Sirius," Remus reasoned, earning a frown from him.

I could totally imagine Remus saying it in a dry/amused voice. Great work!

- Laura

Author's Response: Hey Laura! I'm so glad that you're still excited about this story :D

I'm glad that you liked the every day events, as thought it was a lot less fun to write compared to the last chapter they still need to be in there to give a realistic image of her life. Including her monologues definitely makes it a lot more fun, so I'm glad you liked it.

Haha, that piece of foreshadowing was so much fun and I'm really glad you picked up on it as I adore foreshadowing! I'm glad that you liked the way his character changes as it was quite hard to get into his mindset so it's great it's paying off.

That was the voice I was imaging Remus would have on that line, so yay for voice twins! Thank you for this review, it really brightened my day ♥

-Kiana


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