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Review:ChaosWednesday says:
hey! it's me again!

So while reading this chapter I noticed that you actually ARE narrating in real-time (meh, did I already mention my terrible memory?). Nevertheless, the sentence I pointed out in my last review still seems a bit odd. I suppose it's a matter of choice, but maybe you could replace "will" with "is going to be"? I believe that would make it stand out less. And maybe not use words like "tomorrow" or "now" in the narration either...Gah, ok I'm getting really nitpicky. Sleep deprivation does strange things to a mind...

Moving on! So I really enjoyed this chapter. First, because I think I kind of know what's going on now? Not really sure about the details, but it seems to me that our rag tag group of misfits belong to a wizard organization of sorts that is cooperating with the Muggles in a common attempt to oppose the Nazis? ...Unless they are fighting their own wizard Nazis? I'm sure this will be cleared up in later chapters, but the political environment is a bit of a mystery to me. I know this is veering way off track again, but I do want to know. So, we are dealing with Nazi expansion over Europe. How involved is the wizarding world in all of this? Are there political tensions within the wizarding world regarding whether to oppose national socialism or to support it? From what I got in the HP books, the wizarding world has a completely independent economy from the Muggle world. Is this somehow different in your story? It would actually be kind of cool if we had wizards medling in Muggle affairs. There are a few stories where Grindelwald helps the Nazis for mutual power gain, and some where he is also involved in a few of Stalin's attrocities. Oh! and don't take any of this as criticism ;) I just like to speculate and your story did get me thinking! After all, if the wizarding world dislikes the political events of the Muggle world and follows some sort of interventionist philosophy, then getting rid of the Nazis should not be very difficult, you know? (I'm sorry if you had actually implied a lot of the answers to these questions and I just didn't get the hints :P).

Oh, and I liked the mountain elf! They can steal magical powers? My goodness!

I think that's it for now, but feel free to re-request, I'd love to see where this story leads :D

Author's Response: I'm really privileged to recieve so many lovely reviews from you!

The group is under the orders of the Ministry of Magic, fighting against all Nazis. The Muggles don't know about them, which is why they have so much freedom in their actions (the French government cooperated with the German one during WW2). I think I explained this in Jean's section of the prologue?

But in any case, the French wizards are acting under Ministerial orders, and against all Nazis, especially Muggle ones as they're unsuspecting.

I hope this helped, and thank you for the review :)


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