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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hi darling! I'm back for another chapter!

Yet again another lovely chapter! I really, really enjoyed the first section with the descriptions and explanation about that first class of Hogwarts (that's a story in itself!). It was a good reminder that Helena's mother did help to found Hogwarts and she, in turn, received a magical education.

I love that Helena is entranced by Venn. I like it. A lot. But his actions - I feel like he was trying to keep it cool and act like she was no big deal when we know she's pretty awesome. Either way, it was a fabulous chapter - I like how, well, normal their meeting is. Many authors like for ridiculous things to happen or out-of-this-world events when, for me, I just want something normal.

Sorry this is such a short review, Amanda! It was an excellent chapter!

Shelby

Author's Response: Hello Shelby! My apologies that this response took ages--I was moving apartments and traveling and would have much rather responded and gotten back to The Seams. Hah :)

My idea of early Hogwarts is a lot like Plato's school, where the classes began as small groups of those known to the Founders and gradually branched outward. As you'll see, those growing pains can become a source of contention between Salazar and the others.

Yeah, I figured it would make sense for them to be sort of awkward and curious and yet reserved about one another because that's how it normally goes when you're feeling out a potential new relationship. Of course, they're young and privileged and inexperienced and so naturally their flame will burn alternately hot and cold as time passes.

Thank you for your fantastic review :)

-Amanda


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