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Review:marauder5 says:
It was so sweet when Harry got all exited about having a boy... and then Ginny's comment about Ron turning into a Pygmy Puff, that was so funny! :)

I definitely like the idea of Dean and Seamus working together. So Seamus might have exposed Harry's plans, but it all worked out! I'm glad that they're moving into a new house. The only thing I can point out (and this is merely because I'm such a canon-freak) is that they're not likely to have eight bedrooms. (Remember in the epilogue, how James and Albus offer to share rooms, just so that Teddy will be able to live with them? That suggests that they only have four bedrooms, doesn't it?) Well, anyway, it's not that big of a deal, but I just wanted to point it out :)

Oh, and by the way, I agree with Harry: with Weasley genes in him, that boy is going to need a LARGE ice-box, haha!

And Neville. He's just the best friend anyone can have, isn't he? I LOVE HIM! (sorry for my over-excitement, but his gesture was just too sweet!!) I love the idea of having portraits of Lily, James, and Sirius as well. That last part was very touching.

All in all, this was another wonderful chapter, and I look forward to the next one :)

Author's Response: You're right about the canon part, and them not having more than 4 rooms. I just went a little overboard with the house, I think. It was easy getting carried away giving Harry the home he's always dreamed of and deserved.
Neville is my favorite. I could totally see him doing this kind of thing. After reading that Dean was a good artist, I thought putting him in business with Seamus was just fun. Seamus is fearless, and doesn't care if he makes mistakes. He just keeps trying.
Any child with Weasley genes will eat his parents out of house and home within a week. A large icebox is a necessity.
I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for reviewing.~GW


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